Correct Writing Errors

Posted by Rachel on 2007/1/10 21:33:37

Hello Everybody,

There are some errors in the following two writings. Would you like to help me revise the mistakes? Looking forward to having you guys' notions. Thank you!


(One)
The Whites have a couple of children. They live in Los Angeles. One of the children, Mary, a seniior high school student. She wants to be a nurse in somdays. The other is Joe. He studies in junior high school. He wants to produce motorcycles in seven years.

(Two)
Mr. and Mrs. White have two children. Mary is a senior high school student. She wants to be a nurse. Joe is a junior high school student. He wants to go to the factory work, because he would like to have his own motorcycle. They both have opinion of their future.