Re: Correct Writing Errors

Posted by Rachel on 2007/1/12 13:17:45

Hi sspuds,
Thanks for the excellent correction! As Glotynn said, "Good job!" And would you please try to revise the second one as well?


Apex......
aiyo......please don't scare our new friend away!! Btw, you won't correct the errors for me until i promise a trip to Hawaii, will you? Please don't ask a poor o-ba-sun to offer such a big reward lah!