Re: 可以幫我看句子有錯誤嗎?

Posted by glotynn on 2009/1/11 22:33:04
1 It is not good for them to be addicted to online games so much.

此句是正確無誤的. It是虛主詞, 等同於:
To be addicted to online games so much is not good for them.
至於"not good"寫為no good 或是bad, 都是OK的.
so much亦可移到addicted前面.

2 Many players know "how interesting playing online game is", but did you ever really think about how much time do you play it everyday?

"how interesting playing online games is"是疑問副詞how所引導的名詞子句, 也就是「間接問句」, 還原成直接問句是:
How interesting is playing online games?
「間接問句」無須倒裝, 所以do you play的"do"應移除.
game使用複數games為宜, 相對的it要改成them.

至於您所提到的句子:
How interesting playing online game is!
這是感嘆句寫法, How是「多麼」, 而上述「間接問句」的How是「怎麼個」是, 這是兩回事.

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