Re: What's wrong??

Posted by glotynn on 2012/6/8 16:22:37

1. The bride is much elder than the groom. 新娘比新郎年長許多。
--> The bride is much older than the groom.

2. A voyage from London to Paris can be done by train. 從倫敦到巴黎的旅程可以搭火車。
--> A journey from London to Paris can be done by train.

3. She was a coward on the stage, and could not utter a word. 她怯場到一個字也說不出來。
--> She seized stage fright, and could not utter a word.

4. I made an apology, and tried to have good relationship with my co-workers again after a heated argument. 在激烈的爭論後，我向同事們道歉以重修舊好。
--> I made an apology, trying to mend the relationship with my co-workers again after a heated argument.

5. 5. Your estimate of the market is way terribly wrong. 你對市場的評估錯得離譜。
--> Your estimate of the market is way off the rails.