Re: Who can help me to correct my article...

Posted by glotynn on 2007/4/16 16:32:11

Hi Flitteroliva,

I feel happy that my suggestions could be of some help to you.

By the way, your sentence:
"At this point in time, I literally believe it is so perfect to own a grandmother."
can also be written as follows:
At this point in time, I believe that having her as my grandmother is literally a blessing.