HELP ME CORRECT ( dialogue )

Posted by w19880419 on 2007/4/17 4:30:54

create own dialogue(30 lines minimum-40 lines maximum)
One student is a home buyer, one student is real estate agent
要比較房子和房子有什麼優點好讓客人想要購買的意願Use the comparative用比較級
--Meet in the real estate agent's office and introduce yourselves
--Buyer: Discuss your desire to buy a house. You are not sure if moving to the country or staying in the city is the right choice
--Agent: convince the buyer that living in the country is the right choice.
--Discuss two different country houses for sale
--Choose one house and agree to buy it
thanks


A:May I help you?
B:Yes, I get married recentlly so I'll buy a house. And my name is Emily Li. Just call me Mrs. Li.
A:Mrs. Li, do you have any desire to buy a house?
B:Yes. Actually I live in a country town before.
A:I think the air is fresh.
B:That's right. Although it's quiet and not so crowded, there is not convenient.
A:I guess so. The traffic is not convenient there,right?
B:Yeah, so my husband and I decide to move the city.
A:That will be great.
B:We want to buy a house near by the MRT station.And it better has parking lot.
A:Oh,there are just two houses near by the MRT station and has parking lot.
B:That's nice. How much are they?
A:One sells 3 millons. The other one sells 2.5 millons.
B:What's different?
A:The price is more expensive.
B:HAHA. I know.
A:The size is bigger.One is 30 pings, the other is 25 pings.
B:Uh..how many rooms do they have?
A:Both of two houses has three rooms. And each house has a
full kitchen, living room, and a bath room with a full bath.
B:Ok
A:Just one house is more spacious.
B:Oh..I see.
A:Ok.Do you have any question?
B:No.That's all.
A:So which is your final choice?
B:Uh..I think the price is cheaper one.
A:Why?
B:I think it's almost the same.Just the size is different.
A:Ok. You can pay 5 millions in advance for down payment. We can make a contract in my office.
B:OK.
A:Follow me,please.

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