Re: HELP ME CORRECT ( dialogue )

Posted by glotynn on 2007/4/19 0:20:49

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A: May I help you?
B: Yes, I get got married recently so I'll buy a house. And my name is Emily Li. Just call me Mrs. Li.
A: Mrs. Li, do you have any desire to buy a country house?
B: Yes No. Actually I lived in a country town before.
A: I think the air is was fresh there.
B: That's right. Although it's it was quiet and not so crowded, living there is was not convenient.
A: I guess so. The traffic is was not convenient there, right?
B: Yeah, so my husband and I decided to move to the city.
A: That will be great.
B: We want to buy a house near by nearby the MRT station. And it better has a parking lot.
A: Oh, there are just two houses nearby the MRT station and each has a parking lot.
B: That's nice. How much are they?
A: One sells at 3 millons. The other one sells at 2.5 millons.
B: What's different the difference?
A: The price One is more expensive than the other.
B: HAHA. I know.
A: Actually the sizes is bigger are different. One is 30 pings, and the other is 25 pings.
B: Uh...how many rooms do they have?
A: Both Either of two houses has three rooms. And each house has a full kitchen, living room, and a bath room with a full bath.
B: Ok.
A: Just one house is more spacious.
B: Oh...I see.
A: Ok. Do you have any further question?
B: No, that's all.
A: So which What is your final choice?
B: Uh...I think I'll take the price is cheaper one.
A: Why?
B: I think it's almost the same. Just the size is different.
A: Ok. You can pay 5 millions half a million in advance for down payment. We can make a contract in my office.
B: OK.
A: Follow me, please.

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