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Posted by Flitteroliva on 2007/4/19 22:51:06

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Everyone has their own merits, and I am not an exception. One of them that I am pride of is “thoughtfulness”.


In the modern society, the phenomenon, “Sweep before your boor.”, has become more common. I am so sad to see it that I promise that I'll be a person with a sentimental and thoughtful heart to regain the tender sentiments among people. By acute penetration, it is the easiest way to realize the purpose. Through a sensitive feeling, I am easy to understand their real thoughts and moods when my friends, families and even strangers look somewhat unusual. Then, I accept and share their sorrow and moodiness with pleasure because I can identify with them and just considerate the interaction is the priceless treasure to me to gain the capability of how to get along with others well, and avoid unnecessary misconstruction.


Besides, a sharp insight and sense of occasion always let me notice a subtle change in my bosses and superiors’ attitude so that I can instantly grasp what the point they expect is and know what I should do. In this way, my good vibrations always assure success in any situation.


So, I think “thoughtfulness” is the most priceless value for me in my life.