please check my paragraph and sentence~~

Posted by love_ftts on 2007/11/7 0:30:04
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In conclusion, in order to keep up with the times, English is very important in a career. I think I can make use of English to (advance my advantage) for my future career. Besides, I can (most close) to the whole world in the future. I wish to use what (I learned) for my future career and to strengthen my competitive ability with others.

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1. Therefore, English can help me (make more competitive) in my future career.

2. Due to the trend of internationalization now, (and the second language has become a necessary ability in life).


that's my teacher pointed out my error ( )in my homework, has anybody can correct it? Thanks ...

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