Re: Plz give me some suggestion!

Posted by Tim Luo on 2007/11/8 11:31:33

Carollin,

The following are some pointers for you.

1. visited to many beautiful places

2. I think tourism is a field which is full of challenges and interesting fun

3. The working quality and environment attracted me a lot.

4. the tourism and recreation industries have

5. I promoted polished up on the four skills of listening, speaking, reading, and writing.

6. I emphasized on my Japanese learning
(but you should better rewrite this part to make it more sensible)

7. Having good language abilities, I believe I can bring my vantages into full play in this field.
(better rewrite this sentence too)

Tim