Re: 改寫句子
Posted by Elinor on 2011/9/18 21:12:20
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Futari,
I knew what you meant!
A student wants to design a class T-shirt and he asked me whether the slogan is appropriate or not. It is really weird as you said. Do you think this one “Unity is power” would be better as a slogan, or do you have other better ones in mind?
Thank you!
futari wrote:
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Elinor wrote:
Futari,
I thought it was weird too when I heard of it. That's why I post it here. I will think of a better one after finishing my work and have a discussion with you all.
Thanks a lot.
I'm referring to your sentence as weird, not Aristotle's.
Futari,
I knew what you meant!
A student wants to design a class T-shirt and he asked me whether the slogan is appropriate or not. It is really weird as you said. Do you think this one “Unity is power” would be better as a slogan, or do you have other better ones in mind?
Thank you!
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