Re: 愛打小報告

Posted by glotynn on 2006/9/8 9:07:44
Quote:

gameboy wrote:
as this:i hate that fat guy,he alawys snitches on me once i stole his money


句子瑕疵:
- 兩個完整句子不可僅以逗號相連.
- snitches 與 stole 時態不一致, 用once語意也不合.
- 被偷錢者是苦主, 要向誰打小報告? 如果是向老師或是警方, 早就出事了, 何來always?

修正建議:
I hate that fat guy, because he always snitches on me every time I steal his money.

Happy learning!

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