Re: Monthly translation topic:The Earth is the best

Posted by glotynn on 2006/9/25 9:50:41
Quote:

flower456 wrote:
[1.i was dreaming of being a spaceman when i was young.because the universe makes man surprise for it is very vase.i like to collect [ ] models.and i prefer to share these photos with my friends.after comparing them,i think the earth is the most beautiful one.] i think there are many mistakes here,please correct it.thank you my friends.


Suggested corrections:

I was have been dreaming of being a spaceman when since I was young because the vastness of the universe makes man surprise for it is very vase highly amazed. I like to collect various models of the space shuttles, and I prefer like to share these photos the pictures of the planets with my friends. After comparing them, I think the earth is the most beautiful one in the universe.

This Post was from: http://okenglish.tw/newbb/viewtopic.php?forum=5&topic_id=945&post_id=3132