Re: Monthly translation topic:The Earth is the best
Posted by glotynn on 2006/9/25 9:50:41
Quote:
flower456 wrote:
[1.i was dreaming of being a spaceman when i was young.because the universe makes man surprise for it is very vase.i like to collect [ ] models.and i prefer to share these photos with my friends.after comparing them,i think the earth is the most beautiful one.] i think there are many mistakes here,please correct it.thank you my friends.
Suggested corrections:
I was have been dreaming of being a spaceman
when since I was young because
the vastness of the universe makes man
surprise for it is very vase highly amazed. I
like to collect
various models
of the space shuttles, and
I prefer like to share
these photos the pictures of the planets with my friends.
After comparing them,
I think the earth is the most beautiful one
in the universe.
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