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please check my paragraph and sentence~~
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In conclusion, in order to keep up with the times, English is very important in a career. I think I can make use of English to (advance my advantage) for my future career. Besides, I can (most close) to the whole world in the future. I wish to use what (I learned) for my future career and to strengthen my competitive ability with others.

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1. Therefore, English can help me (make more competitive) in my future career.

2. Due to the trend of internationalization now, (and the second language has become a necessary ability in life).


that's my teacher pointed out my error ( )in my homework, has anybody can correct it? Thanks ...

Posted on: 2007/11/7 0:30
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Re: please check my paragraph and sentence~~
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In conclusion, in order to keep up with the pace of the times, good command of English is very important in a career. I think I can make use of English to advance my create advantage for my future career. Besides, I can most close it can help me to get closer to the whole world in the future. I wish to use what I have learned for in my future career and to strengthen my competitive ability competitiveness advantage with on others.

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1. Therefore, English can help me make more competitive increase my competing power in my future career.

2. Due to the trend of internationalization nowadays, and the second language has become a necessary an essential ability in life.


that's These are the errors my teacher pointed out my error in my homework. has Can anybody can correct it them for me? Thanks ...


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