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I would just try adding a few words to make it smoother. I am Yi-Chun, brought up in a family of nine members, (they are) father, mother, sister, two brothers, a sister-in-law, two nephews and me. My father is a farmer. My mother is a housewife. Tim
Posted on: 2008/1/22 23:36
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