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A true friend is one soul in two bodies. – Aristotle


請問,如果強調整個班級的精神可以這麼改寫嗎? (如果班上的學生有45個人)

A true class is one soul in 45 bodies.

Posted on: 2011/9/16 23:25
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A true friend is one soul in two bodies. – Aristotle


請問,如果強調整個班級的精神可以這麼改寫嗎? (如果班上的學生有45個人)

A true class is one soul in 45 bodies.


What a weird sentence!

Put on your thinking cap, Elinor; I'm sure you'll think of better ones.

Posted on: 2011/9/17 3:17
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Futari,

I thought it was weird too when I heard of it. That's why I post it here. I will think of a better one after finishing my work and have a discussion with you all.

Thanks a lot.

Posted on: 2011/9/17 9:08
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I thought it was weird too when I heard of it. That's why I post it here. I will think of a better one after finishing my work and have a discussion with you all.

Thanks a lot.


I'm referring to your sentence as weird, not Aristotle's.

Posted on: 2011/9/17 12:25
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Elinor wrote:
Futari,

I thought it was weird too when I heard of it. That's why I post it here. I will think of a better one after finishing my work and have a discussion with you all.

Thanks a lot.


I'm referring to your sentence as weird, not Aristotle's.



Futari,

I knew what you meant!

A student wants to design a class T-shirt and he asked me whether the slogan is appropriate or not. It is really weird as you said. Do you think this one “Unity is power” would be better as a slogan, or do you have other better ones in mind?

Thank you!

Posted on: 2011/9/18 21:12
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Futari,

I knew what you meant!

A student wants to design a class T-shirt and he asked me whether the slogan is appropriate or not. It is really weird as you said. Do you think this one “Unity is power” would be better as a slogan, or do you have other better ones in mind?

Thank you!


What's the motive of designing the class t-shirt? For morale rousing? For keep sake? One has to know the main theme first before one can suggest anything that is appropriate.

Posted on: 2011/9/20 0:38
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Futari,

Thank you! The student has found his way.

Posted on: 2011/9/20 22:58
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