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準備一份針對欲申請科系所寫的自傳,除了當備審資料外,面談時若需用英文作自我介紹,更可使你言之有物,條理分明。

高中生通常專業經驗不足,也較難對自己未來學習方向有確定把握,所以在自傳中可描述過去經驗,交待學歷背景,選系動機。理想的自傳長度是200~300字,內容可參考以下要點:

一、家庭背景、人格特質
家庭背景對你申請某科系有無影響?與你的個性、生涯規劃、特殊價值觀有什麼關係?切忌流水帳似的長篇大論,如父親是程式設計師,影響你想申請資訊科學系,這點可寫。而祖父職業是代書與你的選系動機無關,便不需特別介紹。又如母親慈愛且常當義工,使你想見賢思齊,則可以適時加入段落中。家庭成員間的情感以及家庭氣氛對你若有特殊影響,也是可書寫的主題。不過,好文章要剪裁,不要試圖在短短的段落中包山包海,只要聚焦於你最想呈現、影響最深的主題來寫。

二、求學經歷
在求學過程中的有無特殊表現?與所選的科系有何關係?多才多藝的人行文之間要謙虛,強調你從豐功偉業中的所體會的學習精神、獲得的學習成就。沒有彪炳戰績的人,則可以談特別難忘的學習經驗,強調自己學習認真、投入,強調一點一滴的學習經驗,都在為將來的人生作準備。

三、 社團活動
社團經驗若可以彰顯自己為申請該科系的所做的準備,則可仔細描寫社團所規劃的活動。如果沒有相關,可以就拓展「人際關係」、表現「多樣才華」的觀點去強調自己參與社團活動的經驗。

四、嗜好、休閒
與攻讀的科系若無關,則只需點出自己懂得生活調劑,身心健康,不是無聊的書呆子即可。

五、未來目標
讀完大學有何計畫?大學所選的科系如何協助你實現生涯之夢?

以上五點的內容要懂得適當組織,使文意流暢連貫。

沒有人是十項全能,人見人愛的,你的自傳重點是透過學經歷的陳述,表現你的獨特之處,把自己最特別之處不卑不亢地表達出來,就是一份成功的自傳。

英文自傳、自我介紹範例
*範例一:外文系
I am Wenshin Lin. Sophia is my English name. I am eighteen years old, studying in a public girls’ high school. I come from a well-to-do family. My father works in a bank and mother works in a bookstore. I am the only child in the family; however, I am not the so-called spoiled child. My parents make very sure of that by training me to be independent.

Throughout my academic career, I have not only getting god grades but also being very active on sport field and in various societies. I play volleyball and enjoy the team spirit. I have joined the drama club and participated in many speech English contests. I really like to take part in school activities. Through them I make may friends, have lots of fun , and gain many valuable experiences.

I have been the class English tutor for almost three years. I love to discuss and share the experience of learning English with my classmates. We often read China Post and Time Magazine, and then discuss the content, word usage and practice speaking English on the basis of the English materials. At the beginning we found it was quite hard because we could hardly understand what the content was about, but we encouraged each other not to give up. Gradually we found that we had made improvement, which made us extremely excite. Later the group discussion of English books and magazines has become one of the most enjoyable things for us every week. Thanks to all these experiences, I won the first prize for school English speech contest in my second year of high school and many of my English articles had been published on China Post.

My fondness of English has been developed since my childhood. Being the only child, I was lonely, with no one to play with. My mother understood how I felt, so she brought me with her all the time. Hence the bookstore where my mom worked my childhood playground, and books have been my playmates since then. When we were in the bookstore, my mom would show me those fancy books with cute illustrations on it. At first I was drawn by the pictures and then curious about those strange symbols called words. This was my first contact with English. As I was interested in knowing what those symbols meant, my parents taught me a bit. After they felt that I was eager to learn, they found me an English tutor. By starting learning English at really early age, I had an advantage in learning it. And I have to thank my parents for this.

My interest in English brought me to the world of English literature. I have been enchanted by the creative world since then, so I decided to major in English literature. My aim is to explore the world of literature and the world of great writers and thus to open my eyes and cultivate my mind.

我是林文馨,Sophia是我的英文名字。我現年十八歲,就讀公立女中。我有一個快樂美滿的小康家庭;父親在銀行工作,母親則在書店工作。我是家中的獨生女,

但我可不是那種被寵壞的孩子。正因為怕我變得嬌縱,我的父母從小就訓練我要獨立。

在我求學過程中我不僅品學兼優,在運動場上也是活躍的一份子,同時我也參與許多的社團活動,加入了排球社並且非常喜歡那種團隊精神。我也是話劇社的一份子,還參加了許多次的英語演講賽。我非常喜歡參加學校的活動,透過這些活動,我不但可以交到許多朋友,享受許多樂趣,還可以得到許多寶貴的經驗。

我當了快三年的英文小老師,我很喜歡和同學討論並分享學習英語的經驗。我們常常閱讀《中國郵報》和《時代雜誌》,一起討論內容和英文用詞,並且練習用英語討論讀過的文章。剛開始的時候,大家都覺得很難,因為我們連文章都看不太懂,可是我們卻互相鼓勵,要大家不要放棄。漸漸的發覺到我們的英文有進步了,我們可是興奮至極呢,而後小組討論英文書和雜誌變成我們最快了的事。我在高二時參加英語演講比賽得了第二名,所寫的許多英文文章還刊登在學生郵報上。

我對英語的興趣是從小就開始培養的,身為獨生女是很孤獨的,從小就沒有人可以陪我玩。母親知道我會孤單,到哪裡都帶著我,所以她服務的書店就成為我從小的遊樂場,書本也就成為我從小的玩伴。媽媽常拿一些有可愛圖案的輸給我看,一開始我就被書上的圖案給吸引住了,後來對書上一堆怪怪的符號稱之為字的東西感到好奇,這就是我第一次接觸到英文。爸媽看見我有興趣知道這些文字的意思,就教了我一些英文;當他們發現我學習心切,就為我請了一位英文家教。我要感謝我的父母讓我在很小的時候就有機會學英文。

我對英文的興趣帶領我進入了英文文學的世界裡,自此之後這一片創造的園地便令我著迷,因此我決定主修英文文學。我希望能藉此探索文學以及作家們的世界,讓這片偉大的文學天地來開闊我的視野並陶冶我的心智。

範例二:資訊系

I am Xia-dung Fang; my English name is Matthew. I am seventeen years old, studying in a private high school. There are five people in my family. My father is a military officer and my mother is a housewife. Both of my younger brother and sister are junior high school students. You might think that my family is traditional and strict. However, it is the opposite. My parents are open-minded and have a good sense of humor. I must say I am lucky to grow up in this happy family.

My father certainly has a great influence on me. I always look up to him. His passion and dedication to the family is the best thing he gives us. He never forces us children to do things we don’t like. He encourages us to make our own decisions. That’s why I can join a lot of school activities and have the chance to develop my hobbies.

I have been very active in school activities. I am one of the computer freaks who just can’t take my eyes off the computer screen. My friends know I am good at computer, so once there computers have some problems, they will come to me. I am also a pitcher on the school baseball team. Our team has won many, many matches and we thus gained the title “unbeatable team.” I believe this is resulted form our constant practice, hard work, and our strong team spirit.

Although computer and baseball take up most of my leisure time, I manage to use some spare time to play the electronic guitar in a band. I use computer to make many of our songs into MIDI files and forward them to many of my friends. My friends love them and think them awesome. Nothing can make me more proud of myself than to be able to combine my computer skills with music. Don’t get me wrong. I didn’t neglect my study when I take part in so many activities. Unless my grades in school are OK, my parents won’t let me do all these.

I have been interested in computer since I was in the fifth grade of elementary school. At that time my father had a big computer on his desk. Every time I saw how concentrated my father was while using the computer, I was full of admiration. So I said to myself: “Some day, I am going to be like that.” Later my father gave me a new computer, and ever since then, I was addicted to computer, especially after the emergence of the Internet. In fact, surfing the net has become my greatest interest.

The e-commerce has changed our traditional form of life style. Take my case for example: I keep in touch with my friends through email; I send my greetings through e-cards; I buy books from e-bookstore; I shop at many websites and search information through searching engines.

Not to mention how the e-era has bought the most powerful reform to the business world. Banks and stock markets, as well as companies, do transaction through the net, and the space and time limitation no longer exist. I am fascinated with the new change and eager to take part in it. So I have decided to major in Computer and Information Science. I want to be a professional computer programmer who creates and designs the software to meet the needs of people in the e-era.

我是方曉東, 英文名字是Matthew。我今年十七歲,就讀私立高中。我家總共有五人,父親是軍官,母親是家庭主婦。我的弟妹均就讀國中。也許你會認為,由於父親的關係,我的家庭傳統而嚴格,其實不然。我父母都是開明而幽默的人,我很幸運能在這個快樂的家庭成長。

我父親對我有極深遠的影響,我一直都很崇敬他。對家庭的熱誠以及奉獻,是他給我們最好的禮物。他從不強迫我們做不喜歡的事,鼓勵我們自己做選擇,所以我能參加許多學校活動,培養自己的興趣。

我在學校很活躍,是那種眼睛離不開電腦螢幕的電腦狂。我的朋友知道我對電腦很在行,只要電腦有問題,都會找我幫忙。我是校內棒球隊投手,我們的求度贏過無數次比賽,也因被封為「無敵球隊」,而我認為這都是我們不斷練習,辛苦努力及強烈的團隊精神得來的成果。

雖然電腦和棒球佔了我大部分的休閒時間,我還是挪空在樂團中彈吉他。我用電腦將我們的歌曲變成midi檔,傳送給許多朋友,他們很喜歡也覺得很棒。能夠結合電腦和音樂,是最讓我深感驕傲的事。千萬別誤會,我可沒有荒廢學業。除非我的成績還可以,不然我父母不會讓我參加這麼多活動的。

我從國小五年級就開始對電腦感興趣。當時父親擺了一台大大的電腦在他的桌上,每次看他用電腦時,臉上專注的神情,及不由得起了崇拜之心,我對自己說,將來我也要變成像父親一樣。後來父親送我一部新電腦,從此我就對電腦上癮了,在網際網路出現後,我更是入迷,上網成了我最大的興趣。

電子商務已經改變了我們傳統的生活方式,以我自己為例,我用電子郵件和朋友聯絡,寄電子賀卡向朋友祝賀、向電子書店買書,從許多電子網站買東西、利用搜尋引擎找資料。

更不用說電子時代對商業帶來的重大改革:銀行很股市直接在網上經營,公司之間藉由網路進行交易,時間與空間的限制不再存在。我著迷於這新的改變,更想參與中,所以我決定主修資訊科學,我想成為專業的程式設計師,幫助新時代的人創造、設計所需要的軟體。

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主題一:家庭背景
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My name is Yu-hua Lin. I was born on August 1, 1985. There are five people in my family. My father is a business man who has run a restaurant for decades. My mother is his best assistant and at the same time a most capable and loving woman in the world. I have one brother and one sister; both of them are junior high school students. We live in a small but comfortable house in Pintung City . On the whole, we are a very happy family. We like to share a lot of interesting things at dinner and to take trips on holidays.

*Model Paragraph 2
I am Yen-Ping Wen. My English name is Hilary. I was born in Pingtung and have lived here for eighteen years. I grow up in warm family of four members. My father is a professional soldier. He is a man of his duty and he loves his job very much. My mother is a housewife, who always makes sure we are under great care in a neat and comfortable home. My younger sister is a third grader of junior high school, and the two of us like to share all of the joy and hardship of girlhood. As for me, I am a sincere and diligent girl studying in National Pingtung Girls’ Senior High School. This is my family, simple but lovely. My family members are my biggest support and they are the people that I love most dearly.

*Model Paragraph 3
I am Chou Chi-Chan, and my friends call me ‘Da-tou’. I was born and have lived in Pingtung for eighteen years. I love my hometown dearly and fully identify with its culture. My family is composed of seven people. My father works in a factory that produces spare parts. He is serious on work, but he is actually a humorous person. My mother’s job is “washing trains,” which is laborious, but she still takes good care of us. My parents’ sincere attitude toward others has a great influence on me. They make good role models. I have two younger brothers; sometimes we share things happening in school and they often tell me funny jokes to make me laugh. Also, we are lucky to have grandparents live with us, and I have learned wisdom not taught in school from them.

主題二:個人特質、信念
*Model Paragraph 1
I am optimistic by nature. Even when I came across setbacks, I would tell myself:“It’s just a small trouble in my life. I should solve it, and then keep going on.” I had a sorrowful experience before: one of my good friends mistook me because of another’s slander of me. At first, I was sad, but I thought about it for a long time, and then I came to a conclusion: a friend in need is a friend indeed, and maybe she is just not the one. I did not and I will not get even with the liar. The most valuable lesson I learned is that “truth is not necessarily what one sees.” This experience made me even more interested in observation, contemplation, and finally, truths about life.

*Model Paragraph 2
Working hard is one of my good points. I not work hard with my schoolwork but also actively participated in extracurricular activities. Besides, I try to make the most of my time to do something beneficial to our society, like volunteering in a hospital. It is my belief that the more efforts I make, the more likely I will fully use develop my potential and contribute myself to society..

*Model Paragraph 3
When I was in the second grade of junior high school, I experienced a great change. At that time I did very well in my studies but I was timid and introverted. But then I was chosen to participate n the school speech contest. I was worried and nervous to death and wanted to give up. Seeing my trouble, my homeroom teacher said to me, “Just do your best. Pluck up your courage and say what you want to say. And never give up.” With her encouragement, I mad a good speech . After that, I overcame my timidity and shyness and I did everything as best as I could. Until now, these words have become the creed I live by: “Do your best and never give up.”

*Model Paragraph 4
My parents have a great influence on me. They play a very important role in the process of forming my character. My parents’ decent behavior teachers me how to conduct myself well. I follow their examples, so my dealing(待人接物) is honest and fair. Also, my parents often instill healthy ideas about life in me. Thanks to their guidance, I have a correct attitude toward my life, and I can look at things in perspective.(客觀看待事物)

主題三:嗜好、休閒活動
*Model Paragraph 1
My parents always put emphasis on the balance between learning and relaxation; therefore, since my childhood, I have cultivated various hobbies and pastimes. For instance, I like to play the electronic organ in my free time. Whenever I feel depressed, the beautiful melody will be able to comfort me and cheer me up. I am also fond of swimming and playing table tennis. As a table tennis club member, I am a skilled player. Music and sports definitely help me maintain good mental and physical health.

*Model Paragraph 2
In addition to doing my utmost on schoolwork, I take exercise regularly to stay healthy. Almost every day after school, I like to jog or play badminton with classmates. In hot summer, we even go swimming. Besides, going mountain climbing would be my favorite activity on holidays. Through approaching nature, I will be relaxed and soothes by the beauty of it. Cooking for my family is another thing I like to do when I have free time. By doing so, I can share the burden of my mother, and at the same time, I learn skills about life, too.

*Model Paragraph 3
My favorite hobby is reading. It not only provides me with useful information, but it also gives me so much pleasure. By reading I am able to enter another world where I can travel to any period of time and to any place and forget my daily cares. I enjoy reading of many kinds. Besides studying my textbooks at school to pass my exams, I also read for pleasure, gaining additional knowledge I would not learn at school. I like reading novels, adventure stories, travel books, and articles in newspaper and magazines. To tell the truth, reading brings joys and adds more flavors to my tiring and dull school life.

*Model Paragraph 4
My favorite recreational activity is working with the computer. Whenever I turn on my computer, I feel my self in a great mood and forget all my trouble. I always play computer games and chat with people on the Internet. In addition, I am also persuaded that the computer world is worth studying in many ways. I have learned lots of knowledge about computer and various kinds of useful software programs. Besides, I can also expose myself to the latest information through the Internet. To sum up, I consider my favorite activity both entertaining and informing, and I will continue to explore the computer technology.

主題四:學校生活、最喜歡的科目
*Model Paragraph 1
I treasure my school life very much. Though I am not a top student in terms of school grades, I am good at many fields and consider myself a devoted and enthusiastic learner. Among the school subjects, I love English best and surely do pretty well in English learning. I participated in several English speech and composition contests and won very good prizes. Also, I have been active in school camps, including those held by universities, and different kinds of workshops. I believe that extracurricular activities provide valuable opportunities for me to accumulate knowledge and broaden my horizon. I learn important interpersonal skills from these special experiences as well.

*Model Paragraph 2
Looking back on my senior high school days, I feel I have learned a lot of things, including all aspects of knowledge, how to get along with others, and how to take good care of my health. I take many subjects and absorb lots of knowledge from the textbooks and extracurricular materials I read. Therefore, I can deal with mot of the problems in my daily life and make myself a well-informed student. And because I have taken part in lots of class and club activities, I have learned how to cooperate with fellow students. I consider myself responsible in performing my duties, and I am always happy to be able to help others. Lastly, I know the importance of a balanced life, so I take exercise regularly . Going jogging or playing basketball with my friends has been my favorite recreational activity. To sum up, I really enjoy my senior high school life.

*Model Paragraph 3
English is my favorite subject in school. In fact, I didn’t develop English fondness in my childhood like other children. I started learning it when I graduated from elementary school, but I have found it interesting ever since. Although there is a “Taiwanese accent” when I speak English before, I just practice and practice with no thoughts of giving it up. And now my English teacher said that I’ve made great progress. Owing to my passion for English, I have the greatest pleasure and patience in learning English. Sometimes I talk in English with classmates; while our English conversations are often out of logic, we still have great delight in it; going to Bible classes with some friends is also fun. In this way, we believe that we would be brave enough to speak out. Moreover, I enjoy reading English literary works such as The Secret Garden , The Sound of Music, The Diary of Anne Frank, and The Sound of Music. The insights into human nature and the beauty of language are the part appeal to me most.

主題五:選系動機
*會計
I took great interest in mathematics when I was a child. My grade in math at all school levels was always better than those in other subjects. So I think it a good choice for me to major in accounting. It is my belief that an accountant plays an important part in society. For an industry to be prosperous, a sound accounting system is indispensable. I hope the professional training in university we prepare me to be a good accountant.

*國際貿易
I want to take international trading as my major. In view of the fact that Taiwan is an island country with limited natural resources but abundance of man-power, our country must depend on export and import, if we are to progress and prosper. I take great interest in international affairs and economic activities, hoping four years’ training in university will provide me with the qualifications of being a specialist in the field of international trade.

*教育
I would like to major in education and be a teacher in the future. In my opinion, the work of a teacher is not dull at all. A good teacher has to be sensitive to the reactions of each student and to convey points in an interesting and effective way. Furthermore, happiness is the next thing teaching can offer. It is extremely delightful to see students improve themselves in the fields of knowledge and of personality. Besides, as a saying goes, “to teach is to learn twice,” in the process of teaching and helping students solve problems, teachers improve themselves too. For these reason, I have made up my mind to learn how to be a good teacher.

*應用外語
When it was time for me to decide my major, to be frankly, I had a hard time making a decision. Finally, I decided to major in Foreign Languages and Applied Linguistics, a field I am not so familiar with. That’s because after long contemplation, I finally determined to become a professional translator in an international company. To fulfill this dream, I need related training and cultivation. I learned that the curriculum of Foreign Languages and Applied Linguistics is exactly what I need if I want to be a competent translator with solid commercial background. With the support from my family, I am looking forward do having solid professional training in college.

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