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HELP ME CORRECT ( dialogue )
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create own dialogue(30 lines minimum-40 lines maximum)
One student is a home buyer, one student is real estate agent
要比較房子和房子有什麼優點好讓客人想要購買的意願Use the comparative用比較級
--Meet in the real estate agent's office and introduce yourselves
--Buyer: Discuss your desire to buy a house. You are not sure if moving to the country or staying in the city is the right choice
--Agent: convince the buyer that living in the country is the right choice.
--Discuss two different country houses for sale
--Choose one house and agree to buy it
thanks


A:May I help you?
B:Yes, I get married recentlly so I'll buy a house. And my name is Emily Li. Just call me Mrs. Li.
A:Mrs. Li, do you have any desire to buy a house?
B:Yes. Actually I live in a country town before.
A:I think the air is fresh.
B:That's right. Although it's quiet and not so crowded, there is not convenient.
A:I guess so. The traffic is not convenient there,right?
B:Yeah, so my husband and I decide to move the city.
A:That will be great.
B:We want to buy a house near by the MRT station.And it better has parking lot.
A:Oh,there are just two houses near by the MRT station and has parking lot.
B:That's nice. How much are they?
A:One sells 3 millons. The other one sells 2.5 millons.
B:What's different?
A:The price is more expensive.
B:HAHA. I know.
A:The size is bigger.One is 30 pings, the other is 25 pings.
B:Uh..how many rooms do they have?
A:Both of two houses has three rooms. And each house has a
full kitchen, living room, and a bath room with a full bath.
B:Ok
A:Just one house is more spacious.
B:Oh..I see.
A:Ok.Do you have any question?
B:No.That's all.
A:So which is your final choice?
B:Uh..I think the price is cheaper one.
A:Why?
B:I think it's almost the same.Just the size is different.
A:Ok. You can pay 5 millions in advance for down payment. We can make a contract in my office.
B:OK.
A:Follow me,please.

幫我看看哪裡需要修正的
有沒有符合上面敘述
如果覺得有些多於可以刪掉或是可以多加些句子...謝謝

Posted on: 2007/4/17 4:30
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Re: HELP ME CORRECT ( dialogue )
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Hello W19880419:
Welcome here!! hope you can enjoy learning English here.
By the way, You can use "reply" to answer others post then you don't need to re-start a new topic.


ps:
Like the link below, you can use "reply",not use "edit"
http://okenglish.tw/modules/newbb/viewtopic.php?topic_id=1847&forum=4

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Re: HELP ME CORRECT ( dialogue )
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Hello all dear friends:
Do you have any suggestions to W1988? Don't ask me because I am not good at selling house.><lll

Posted on: 2007/4/18 22:59
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Re: HELP ME CORRECT ( dialogue )
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A: May I help you?
B: Yes, I get got married recently so I'll buy a house. And my name is Emily Li. Just call me Mrs. Li.
A: Mrs. Li, do you have any desire to buy a country house?
B: Yes No. Actually I lived in a country town before.
A: I think the air is was fresh there.
B: That's right. Although it's it was quiet and not so crowded, living there is was not convenient.
A: I guess so. The traffic is was not convenient there, right?
B: Yeah, so my husband and I decided to move to the city.
A: That will be great.
B: We want to buy a house near by nearby the MRT station. And it better has a parking lot.
A: Oh, there are just two houses nearby the MRT station and each has a parking lot.
B: That's nice. How much are they?
A: One sells at 3 millons. The other one sells at 2.5 millons.
B: What's different the difference?
A: The price One is more expensive than the other.
B: HAHA. I know.
A: Actually the sizes is bigger are different. One is 30 pings, and the other is 25 pings.
B: Uh...how many rooms do they have?
A: Both Either of two houses has three rooms. And each house has a full kitchen, living room, and a bath room with a full bath.
B: Ok.
A: Just one house is more spacious.
B: Oh...I see.
A: Ok. Do you have any further question?
B: No, that's all.
A: So which What is your final choice?
B: Uh...I think I'll take the price is cheaper one.
A: Why?
B: I think it's almost the same. Just the size is different.
A: Ok. You can pay 5 millions half a million in advance for down payment. We can make a contract in my office.
B: OK.
A: Follow me, please.

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Posted on: 2007/4/19 0:20
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