Re: Who can help me to correct my autobiography?

Posted by glotynn on 2007/3/31 1:55:14

Editing suggestion (Part I)

 My Background
In the appearance, I am like most senior high students. I take school work seriously. I have dreams and goals in the future that I am determined to carry out. My name is Hsu Hui-Min. I was born in Kaohsiung City. Because I was born in Raising a Christian family, my parents educate me in a special way.

My mother, who plays an important role in my life, always teaches me everything in God’s words, especially from the book of Psalm and Proverbs. My father is not just my teacher but also my best friend. He always shares his rich experiences and colorful childhood memories with me. I have indeed learned a lot from him.

As to my elder sister, she affects me to be an independent girl. Whenever I have problems or troubles, I must do my best to solve them before asking for others' help. My brother is younger than me by seven years, so that I have the chance to be his teacher. Meanwhile, I found it is not an a no easy job and the field that is worth studying as well in the future.

 My Personality
Optimistic: I always like to look on the bright side of things.
Considerate: I always think of others' feeling.
Easy-going: I always try to make others feel comfortable.
Independent: I will usually do my best before asking help from others.
Introspective: I like to think consider and observe people and things around me. I am sensitive and like to meditate.