Re: My correction for autobiography

Posted by 123 on 2007/4/1 13:56:18

Hello Shannon:
Go GO GO




Shanon:第一次 post 的link.
Bo BO goe has given her some suggestions and Uncle Glot has corrected part of paragraph for her,too.

http://okenglish.tw/modules/newbb/viewtopic.php?topic_id=1751&forum=31