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Posted by Flitteroliva on 2007/4/20 0:16:55

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In Taiwan, the percent of people having cars is sharply increasing. Are so many cars in our streets a curse or a blessing？


Most of people agree that cars can bring many benefits to the masses. By driving cars, we can have a free move to a more distant place, and enjoy door-to-door service. Besides, it is safer than riding motorcycles especially in rainy days or on bumpy roads. These facts are very obvious advantages.


However, when enjoying the convenience, we also can’t ignore that something harmful is produced at the same time. For example, cars’ waste gas causes air pollution and greenhouse effect, a traffic jam usually delays a schedule fixed in advance, and more and more people are injured and even die in traffic accidents.


We all know that every coin has two sides and the issue in question is no exception. So, in my opinion, as long as we face these shortcomings squarely; then figure out perfect solutions to them, such as inventing organic fuel, cultivating the habit obeying traffic rules, etc. In this way, owning a car is really not a bad thing for us.