Re: Please help me to correct my article

Posted by Flitteroliva on 2007/4/21 20:02:09

Hmmm...Ｉgot it.. ^ ^
they are directly written through the senses
so many details is easily neglected so that my article always is full of loopholes
but now I am very cheerful to feel that seemingly I make progress gradually because of these alterations
Thank you very much