Re: Please! Please! (grammar errors)

Posted by enigma on 2007/5/13 15:58:04
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ginny wrote:
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enigma 寫道:
Hmm let me take the first stab at it, but i am sure i won't nail every grammatical detail here...hehe i love violent analogies.


Second, after online peer-evaluation, the scores of the students’ final drafts are significantly improved when <strike>comparing</strike> compared to their second drafts.


請問一下為什麼要用when compared to their second drafts....為啥不行用comparing ????
thanks!


Correct me if I am wrong, but I believe if you use "comparing", you are actually saying 分數 (scores) 它們自己會互相比較.這樣不是很可怕嗎? :D 用 compared 意思是分數它們是被比較,用被動語氣. Could any epxert here confirm my answer. Thanks.

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