Re: 這句是什麼意思？是否有錯？
Posted by glotynn on 2006/12/13 23:40:03
這句話乍看起來沒錯, 其實有二處不妥:
1)此句需要一個逗號隔開兩部份, 如果沒有逗號, "the whole world is falling" 與 "it's only yourself that's leaning"兩件事都成了think的受詞, 與原先要表達的意思就不符了.
2)連接詞誤用. 語意一致用and, 語意相反用but, 此句屬於後者.
Sometimes you think the whole world is falling, but it's only yourself that's leaning.
1)此句需要一個逗號隔開兩部份, 如果沒有逗號, "the whole world is falling" 與 "it's only yourself that's leaning"兩件事都成了think的受詞, 與原先要表達的意思就不符了.
2)連接詞誤用. 語意一致用and, 語意相反用but, 此句屬於後者.
Sometimes you think the whole world is falling, but it's only yourself that's leaning.
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