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Rachel, will I win a trip to Hawaii?
Posted on: 2007/1/11 0:13
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Apex, come on! Virtue is its own reward! A nice guy like you, will never ask for anything by helping people, right?
Posted on: 2007/1/11 13:06
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The Whites have a couple of children. They live in Los Angeles. One of the children, Mary, a [senior] high school student, wants to be a nurse [some day] while her brother, Joe, who is still in junior high school, wants to ["produce???"] have/make his own brand of motorcycle in seven years.
Posted on: 2007/1/11 14:01
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The Whites couple and their two children live in Los Angeles. One of the children, Mary, a [senior] high school student, wants to be a nurse [some day] while her brother, Joe, who is still in junior high school, wants to ["produce???"] have/make his own brand of motorcycle in seven years.
Posted on: 2007/1/11 14:32
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Rachel, I guess somebody likes you, they registered today just to correct your sentences for you. I know who you'll take to Hawaii now...... :(
Posted on: 2007/1/11 19:20
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Good job with good correction, sspuds.
"The Whites have a couple of children" doesn't seem right, because "The Whites" refers to the whole family, and not only Mr. and Mrs. White.
Posted on: 2007/1/11 22:47
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Hi sspuds,
Thanks for the excellent correction! As Glotynn said, "Good job!" And would you please try to revise the second one as well? Apex...... aiyo......please don't scare our new friend away!! Btw, you won't correct the errors for me until i promise a trip to Hawaii, will you? Please don't ask a poor o-ba-sun to offer such a big reward lah!
Posted on: 2007/1/12 13:17
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Haha Rachel, me? scare people away? I thought I attract people...and you are the one who.....nevermind, I don't want to get in trouble with you again. I remember last time I had to hide for two weeks. Really, I was going to correct those sentences for you, but as you can see, I talked too much and someone beat me to it.
Posted on: 2007/1/12 18:25
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The second one still no one to revise it. Thank you !!
Posted on: 2007/1/22 16:42
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