Generally speaking, we learn some viability in the department of applied science of living. For example, cooking is one of the viabilities. From now on, we start talking about the cooking. On entering the class, we wear the clean and tidy overalls. Then, we follow the teacher’s teaching to read a cookbook and observe the safety rules. Only by this can we own a good course.
In my opinion, cooking is not easy. First of all, we are sure to notice the choices of the food. We choose the sanitary and right foods. In the second, we are sure to notice the cut skills and the cooking outfits. In the third, we are sure to notice duration and degree of cooking and gastronomy. And then, we are sure to notice the time of cooking. Finally, we have to notice the design of the made dish. In this way, we can work out our potentialities best to finish the whole cooking. In conclusion, the department of applied science of living is a very interesting department.

Hello Eric:
Welcome here.
Do you like cooking?

so so

Hello Eric:
請問您這篇自傳是面試用的,或者是申請學校用的,或者只是當做寫作練習?

學校作業要用

Hello Eric:
got it.

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Generally speaking, we learn some viability in the Department of Applied Science of Living. For example, cooking is one of the viabilities. From now on, we start shall be talking about the cooking. On entering the class, we wear the clean and tidy overalls. Then, we follow the teacher's teaching guidance to read a cookbook and observe review the safety rules. Only by this can we own a good course.

In my opinion, cooking is not easy. First of all, we are sure to notice the make choices of the food to cook. We choose the sanitary and right foods food ingredients. In the second Second, we are sure need to notice the cutting skills and the cooking outfits. In the third Third, we are sure to notice have to mind duration and degree of cooking and gastronomy. And then, we are sure to notice should carefully control the time of cooking. Finally, we have to notice the ensure good-looking design of the made dish. In this way, we can work out our potentialities best to finish the whole cooking.

In conclusion, the Department of Applied Science of Living is a very interesting department to study in.

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