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月色那样模糊
The Moon is so blurred,

大地笼上夜雾
The Earth covers the night mist (--- 這個句子不清楚. 是不是這裡的意思應該是”The night mist covers the Earth”?)

我的梦中的人儿呀
(That) figure in my dreams,

你在何处
Where are you?...

远听海潮起伏
The tide can be heard from the distance moving up and down,

松风正在哀诉
The wind among the pines is griefly suing now,

我的梦中的人儿呀
你在何处

没有蔷薇的春天
A spring without roses

好像竖琴断了线
looks like a snapped-string harp,(I'm not sure if this is correct...)

活在没有爱的人间
Life among loveless people

过一日好像过一年
To spend a day is like spending a year.

夜莺林间痛哭
The nightingale is bitterly crying in the wood,

草上溅着泪珠
Teardrops splashing on the grass,

我的梦中的人儿呀
你在何处

我的梦中的人儿呀，
你在何处？

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1HSPwUnSExU

A very beautiful old and sad song, Dashushu ... I only found a Japanese translation ...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kaTQSphVCZ0

... here one more version from 1942 (Gong Qiu Xia).

(It comes with Pinyin and English)


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=of1tIaHGxwE

errh..... Grandma used to hum the song.. now I am missing grandma!!

Thank you lovely people..

I would have whistled the melody together with your grandma ... also like that song!

Heyy, nice to see you, guys!

I am very surprised.. so this is an old song, huhh!

I'm trying to translate it to Hungarian, but the English version you showed, Dagege, hm, is a bit strange...
Why is it called a "child"? I think it does not fit the modern version's conception at all... At least Miss Chou does not perfor the way it was about a child... And what may be "Falling tenderly on earth cage" and "Nightingale forest between crying"...
Maybe my English is too poor for this...

Anyway, Danke!


(Ok, I thought this over! Yes, it must be child, it is just that in my dictionary it is "figure" for 人兒...)

月色那样模糊
(So) Fuzzy is the moonlight,
大地笼上夜雾
(And the) Night mist envelops the earth,
我的梦中的人儿呀
The one in my dream / My dreamt one,
你在何处
Where are you?


远听海潮起伏
Listening to the undulating sea in the distant,
松风正在哀诉
(While) Winds are whining among the pines.
我的梦中的人儿呀
你在何处


没有蔷薇的春天
Spring without roses,
好像竖琴断了线
Is like (a) harp with broken strings,



活在没有爱的人间
(And) Living / Being in a loveless world,
过一日好像过一年
A day seems like a year.


夜莺林间痛哭
(The) Nightingale(s) is/are wailing in the woods,
草上溅着泪珠
Splashing the grass with teardrops.

Deadserpent, 謝謝你!